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Sep 18, 2011, 6:19:27 AM
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:iconsirjaymes:
I haven't posted for awhile...

I don't think I like the oof flower in the bg...unless perhaps it balances out the empty space? I'm not sure...
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^3wyl Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I think if that flower in the background was positioned a bit differently to the main subject matter, it would be better. At the moment, it does feel a bit too close and possibly.. clashing with things?

I like the depth of field and how you've focused on something that appears to be so small. I feel that you could have moved the camera more to the right, maybe, but other than that, it's really not so bad.

Great stuff! :D

It would be better if it was by itself, maybe. >.>
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~SirJaymes Oct 15, 2011
Thanks! :) I appreciate it!
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~x-Eos-x Oct 3, 2011
this one reminds me of crabs. the petals are each really meaty. it would be so awesome if there was an even smaller out of focus flower to the farthest left.
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~SirJaymes Oct 3, 2011
Ooh, crabs are exciting! Yeah, I wish there were...
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~CecilyAndreuArtwork Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I like your arrangement; it looks rather poetic! :)
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~SirJaymes Oct 1, 2011
Thanks :)
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Mood: Joy !Torpedo43 Sep 28, 2011
Tho' mine eye is draw to the foreground, it tends to wander to the back...the balance here leaves one to concentrate on forming the back-ground image...at least with me ;) It works well with the offset you present; I'd not centre this...just my humble opinion ;)
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~SirJaymes Sep 28, 2011
Thanks! :)
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!Torpedo43 Oct 2, 2011
Welcome! :)
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